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Ahhh...good idea, just wish we could have more choices. And at the very least he's a FINE choice~ Good luck ^^

Whoaaaa whoa whoa whoa. A VN for fatfurs?! AT LAAAAAST!

Will Agnarr be the only love interest? *looks at screenshot of musclegut bear*

Hmmmm...I wonder if the Beast of Bray Road will make an appearance....

So far, I'm loving this! Early on in Morris' route. The writing is great, the humor is wonderful, and there's generous use of basic animations. SUPER kudos for putting in the effort NOT to mirror sprites when it would be obvious (the store uniforms, the hearts shirt, Morris' arm, etc). I notice some characters don't have speaking sprites (like Vendrake), but this is still a very early build from the version number.

You also managed to make a flamboyantly gay character that doesn't drive me up the wall, and in fact is someone I care for, with King. (I'm bi, so it's not the sexuality of those characters that gets to me.) He's bright, confident, and affectionate without being overbearing and in-your-face. I can't wait to see how things turn out for him!

I noticed how linear it was, and coming back here I see its "mostly kinetic" so that explains things. That said, I think you might want to consider changing the narration from second person to third, since Kobu is clearly his own character, and because it's so linear. I don't feel like I'm Kobu the same way as other VN protags because of how few choices we get. So maybe make it third-person? (I know that's a LOT to rewrite, so I understand if you decide not to ^^; )

I super-appreciate that you actually have multiple body shapes available for paths--you've got the twink, the bara, and the beefcake. As a fan of softer guys, I think it's awesome that you're letting us choose like this. All three also are quite interesting. Lucien's stuck up, but clearly concerned and good at heart; Morris is surprisingly crafty for a boar (yay pigs!) and down to Earth; and Toast is adorably off the wall. As well, I've noticed that your nipples are...actually pretty tame, and that's kinda refreshing. They don't try and draw your attention, they're very simple and convey what you intend. (At least on Kobu so far, dunno how it is on the others.)

Overall, this is a lovely project, and I can't wait to see where this goes. If the story itself is already complete, as in we get an ending, I'll be VERY impressed since this is such an early build! Keep working hard, looking forward to more :)

Ah, thank you very much! ^^

If I download this, does it have all the content from the previous one? Or will I only be able to Steam multiplayer with the newer content?

Just started this VN, and I am very happy that the best friend is a musclegut, and that his path is done. Also, SERIOUS kudos for having the portraits of the speaker, ESPECIALLY Adrian, in the corner! I don't always look up to see expression changes, and this helps a lot.

Waiiiiit wait wait. A game about NAGAS?! Sign me up!